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| Reviews for The Legend of Hoshi: Metronome of Time |
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   Sightlines 4/24/10 . chapter 24Aww I didn't want Sasori to be the bad guy but I guess it's okay because there always needs to be a bad guy. Okay so I found two mistakes very close together. One was Temari's name, you wrote Tamari, and Ichibi's pig was named Rosin in one sentence and Rosan in another. Good job! |
| Sightlines 4/17/10 . chapter 23 That as pretty cool but awefully short... I am totally looking forward to the next chapter because the ranch is coming back! Yay! |
| Sightlines 4/17/10 . chapter 22 What has happened to Kon? Who is Shisa? So many questions so many possibilities! And Are the sages? I am really looking to that actually. I am curious to see who you are going to place as the sage of spirit because who ever it was wasn't actually introduced in the beginning in the story (basing off the game) |
| 8DRainbowManVan8D 4/12/10 . chapter 3 i love zelda and ocarina of time was my favorite. beat it when i was 6-ish? lol XD i love it XD naruto and zelda. swetuh! |
| Sightlines 4/9/10 . chapter 21 Two sgaes instead of one? That was a shocker! I was wondering who was going to play the part of the sage. But two is better than one! |
| Sightlines 4/9/10 . chapter 20 I love these chapters! Instead of having the stupid blank space, you added fillers! They are very creative I must say! I still want the adult chapters to come though! |
| Sightlines 4/2/10 . chapter 19 This is a good filler. Telling what Hoshi and Rokubi are doing while Kyuubi is in his comatose state for the years. Cna't wait until the next chapter! |
| Sightlines 4/2/10 . chapter 18 This i smy favourite part of the entire game :D I always enjoyed watching this cutscene :D You wrote it well! |
| Sightlines 3/26/10 . chapter 17 I'm really getting attachedtonthis story :D I cannot wait until the next round of updates! |
| Sightlines 3/26/10 . chapter 16 Sweet! Kyuubi has all the stones now! He can be bigger now and meet the sages! Wewt! |
| Sightlines 3/19/10 . chapter 15 Aww that was cute. There isn't much I could say about about becasue right about now I am having happy dreams about Sanbi and Rokubi! |
| Sightlines 3/19/10 . chapter 14 Kisame was so mean but now he is going to tell Kyuubi ans Sakura a story! Mood swings much?(Not that I mind) |
| Sightlines 3/19/10 . chapter 13 Heh nice one Kakuzu, he is quickly becoming one of favourite characters even though the Happy Mask Salesman was the character that scared me the most in the original game |
| Sightlines 3/19/10 . chapter 12 Sorry for the late review! Yay! Hoshi and Kyuubi met again! And Sai has arrived! He is amazing! |
| Sightlines 3/6/10 . chapter 11 Yay! Kyuubi saved them! I really enjoy this :D can't wait until the next installment! |
