Wow. This chapter has been up for TWO MONTHS and I never even noticed it. Grr.

*ten minutes later... after Bearit has beaten herself to a pulp*

Another great chapter, and I can't wait for more! Though I'm a bit scared as to what will happen to Hikaru... PLEASE not the same thing that happened to Kamui's mother in the manga! That would be just too sad, and think of LANTIS, for crying out loud! Anyway, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!

More updates! Yay! Can't wait to see what happens next... and Satoru really IS going to turn out to be a pawn in this entire game, isn't he? A pawn that dies, just like how the dragons may end up. Mou... Anyway, can't wait for more!

Ahahahahaha! Beware! the all mighty power of the show and its influencial powers! I actually read this chap afew days ago but only just now got around to reviewing and I must say, update again! I wanna see where this goes! Do it! update, right now! If for no one else, then for me!

**bouncse up and down and up and down, squealing** Yay!! I like this muchly!! **nods** And I'm gladd yoo decided to finish it. >;^-^;

*_* You updated! Yay! Me happy! Nothing like a dark fic to brighten up your day... er... that's an oxymoron. Right. I knew that. ^^;;;;; So, is Satoru going to end being a pawn in Hinoto's evil plans? He isn't going to die, is he?! Next chapter, onegai kudasai ne? ^_~

Hazzah! thou hast updated! I'm so glad. ^_^ And I had been just thinking (I hope chapter three of Pre-Ordained comes out soon) yeah! Happy day! You have to continue or I'll through a shoe at you!

Aaarggh! Wowie cute! Kinikilig ako tuwing naiimagine ko si Papa Lantis! Anyway, it hurts me to think what Lantis felt after reading that "short" note. Maybe you were too hard at him. ^-^ All I can say about this fic is, hurry up already with the next chapters! I can't wait to read your ideas, maybe it's great to find a way for Lantis and Kamui to meet each other, maybe even for a glimpse. Please? Ok, til next time! Mwah!

Wai! I'm not the only one who noticed the similarities between Kamui and Hikaru. ^_^ And I thought I was the only person on the face of the planet who liked the idea of Satoru and Kuu getting paired up... apparently, I'm not. Yay! ^^ This is a lovely fic you have here, and I'll be waiting to read some more!

I can't believe that someone's top ten will include two of my favorite characters. (Hisoka and Vegeta) I'm kind of into the vindictive turns-into-good-friend-later-on-in-the-story psychopath character. But please don't think that I'm reviewing your story because i idolize vegeta and started a religion about hisoka. You are a fantastic writer and hopefully you keep on posting more fics in the future! Just please don't write too much yaoi. I think that one of those who reviewed your story is requesting for one though I can't fully understand the language it was written in. Was that Indonesian? Well anyway keep posting so I'll keep reviewing your good stuff!

Yea! You updated! I really like this cross over fic, which says alot 'cause as I may have mentioned, I'm not big on cross overs but the idea is really good. Though the writing could be better, but that comes with time. One question, are you going to kill Hikaru off? Because I know that in X Kamui's mother is dead. so is she going to die? And what about Lantis and the others? I know that you've set this up for Kamui -Hikaru's son- to be the dragon-god thingie just like in X but I think It would be cool if someone did something like that with Lantis and Eagle. It could work, I mean their aura's are similar and they have the whole opposite thing going... Anyways, I'm interested in seeing the next update and If you have writer's block you could always bounce idea's off people. It's the best way to work out stories (in my opinion)

A rather interesting idea....and a fairly good piece of writing. Post more soon?

you are going to break my heart ano?

WAAAAHHH!!!

honestly, I like the story. pero alam mo naman ako , i am i sucker for happy endings. (only for Hikaru-Lantis ha...)

can you make a way na magkita ulit sila? sobrang gusto ko pa rin silang magkita!!!

Please tell me you're continuing this! I usually don't like cross-overy things, but this I like! EEEEE! X is cool, but so is Rayearth... Clamp is cool! Poor lantis though. I think she should have elabourated a little on the note, but hey, it still works. I'm just hoping that they'll figure out what's going on sooner or later. Try to get a beta reader or something though. One thing that I have a problem with is you kept changing the tense.

ie/ every word he spoke were firm and reassuring. Tears welled up her eyes before she could stop herself. She placed her hands on his head, feeling the silky jet- black hair on her palms.

I think it would be better if this line was like this:
Every word the kailu spoke was firm and reasuring. Tears welled in her ruby eyes, despite her attepmt to hold them back. Her gentle fingers ran through his silky jet black hair and held him close.

Something along those lines. Have I helped you? Hope so. keep up the good work.