It does have a really good plot though I'll give you that. Shame you decided to run and leave it here to rot though.

Goddamn you people are shit when it comes to chapter length.

I must say that this is an interesting story. I can't wait for the next chapter it's going to be awesome when naruto totally wipes the floor with neji

I want more!

So far I like this fic! I usually don't read challenge fics cause they usually get abandoned half way through but I figured what the heck its Shakugan no Shana one of the most amazing animes ever so naturally, it was worth looking into.

I can't wait to see what the deal with thoes mysterious figures is and what Hecate does to Hinata as though I'm a huge fan of her's this was a romance labled under Naruto and Hecate not NaruHina so you got me thinking something bad is gonna happen to her soon sadly. But I'm looking forward to it regardless. Till your next update,

-Bubbajack out!

plez update

Nice, I really hope you'll continue this, will you give Naruto some of Yuji's powers as well, like his personal unrestricted spell Grammatica? I don't know about you but I personally think it would be awesome seeing as Grammatica was designed to do anytning the owner needed it to.

Considering that this story hasn't been updated for over a year, I'll assume that it won't be finished. Shame though, I liked what I read and I was looking forward to more, but I guess there won't be more. Oh, well.

great story. i read all your Shakugan no Shana/naruto stories and this one i feel has the most potential with having shana and yugi still alive and naruto a flame haze of kyuubi. It would be nice if you kept the idea of the tri-kunai being a treasure and have naruto collect it. also it would be interesting if another of the 9 became a flame haze, maybe yugito with the nibi? please update soon.

well done.

... i would like to being by saying hell yes! THIS is the naruto/shakugan story i've been waiting for! i love it! great job!

Great story cant wait for more

This is great! I always did like Shakugan no Shana and combining it with Naruto instantly got my attention. The idea of Naruto with that flaming hair and golden eyes is great, any chance you have a picture of this with him wearing Shana's style of clothes? Can't wait for the next update!

awesome story please continue

Great chapter can't wait to see what you'll come up with next I can't wait till the fights begin.