 lacking efficiency 11/5/10 . chapter 1I couldn't leave without reviewing, and I can't believe this hasn't been reviewed more. I love the subtlety of this, and you can totally see a real life viewpoint of a frienship starting to grow into something more, even if it might be one sided. _ I love it, wonderful job. |
 fEmAleNoMad 2/6/10 . chapter 1This is too cute. I love the whole fic in general. I thought the fic did emphasize the ship enough, it was just subtle about it, like with the candy hearts and Charles' reactions. There wasn't anything overt there, but you could tell it was there. |