so cute and sweet..

that made me smile... really sweet

Love it! Very sweet and reflective, I liked that you added your own touches to Rin's outward appearance. Squall is really sweet, I thought he was gonna leave the box there for a second.. great job with the characters and the writing. Mush is what I love. Keep it up.

Sweet although I wonder why you wrote it in the present tense. Not that I'm complaining or anything but narative stories (unless they are scripts) are written in the past tense... although judgeging by your writing style you should already know that... Still, doesn't hurt to ask sometimes. ^-^

Ah, what a beautiful job you have done. You were able to take a simple concept and action and turn it into something elegant and lovely. I commend you; not many writers can do that, including myself. There was an occasion where you switched to past tense, but besides that, everything was wonderful. Masterfully done.

Squall and Rinoa are a great couple! Great story!

GOSH you are so good! Where did you get these AMAZING writing skills? Hehe, they, including you, are truly brilliant, I tell you. I love this fanfic! *gives 1 thrillon thumbs up* See ya and keep writing!
~*Squall's angel*~

This one is really good too! Is there going to be another chapter, or is this just a one-shot?

This is one of the most romantic stories i have ever read!!!!!!!!! ugh! it's just breathtaking! ^^ haha! wonderful! just simply wonderful!

wow. that was great! it's really left me smiling right now. ^^ that was a squall that i can learn to love myself, insecure but very sweet. *sigh* magic...what a wonderful word, eh? please, KEEP WRITING!

This was so beautiful! Especially the ending (Yay!) You're a fantastic writer.

What a beautiful story! You are truly an artist. A magnificent artist who paints with words. The pure emotion in this story was extremely moving. Wonderful job!

Oh wow!!! Yati, this was absolutely wonderful. You have such a wonderful way with the characters and their emotions. And neither of them said one word through the entire piece, heheh. That was wonderful. I loved Squall's slow and uncertain actions and all his feelings you portrayed through eloquent words. I just love this piece! It's not mush! It's absolutely beautiful! ^_^

Oooo....pretty....I'm not much of a Squinoa fan (Rock on, Qualls!!!) but this was written so beautifully, it didn't really matter who it was about. Change the title; this wasn't ALMOST, this was Magical.

Oh, that was so dreamy!! I think a nice closing would've been for him to place the box open by the vase also!