Hey,

I love this story, i love the pace, the depth and its complexity. congratulations on having the courage to post such long chapters, i prefer that to short ones,

I hope your health improves, from one sick person to another, and may you one day rediscover the joy of writing.

Xxx

Rose-Upon-the-Mountain

I'll keep reading, as I really truly enjoy this story and it has managed to pull me back into Harry/Draco after a long hiatus, but must admit to being surprised that I'm the first to notice that you mis-alphabetized your betas. I suppose it shows how indebted you are to them. I was also stunned to see how many betas you employ with so many grammatical errors floating about. But, I digress. This is fabulous. It's rare to find a good story that's long and full of promise. Please continue, as it's been far too long since an update and I know people still come to this story, regardless of how long it's been.

This is the most amazing Harry Potter fanfic I've ever read. I never even began reading Harry Potter fanfiction until this story. Words fail me to describe how enthralled I was with the story. Everything is absolutely perfect; the plot-twists, the romance, the new concepts of magic, the prophecy, and well the sex. This will forever be the concrete of my love for Harry Potter and Harry/Draco. After reading the last chapter I'm very eager to see what happens next. Cliffhangers always get to me. Please update - even though it's been like 4 years - and give us some more of this brilliant story that makes my day.

This is one of the most intriguing, well thought out, thoroughly developed stories I've ever read on this website. I simply do not have words to express how much I've enjoyed this story so far, how absolutely amazing it really is.

You've created such an interesting plot, you've developed your own ideas into believable situations and scenarios that the reader is immediately drawn in by. I love everything about it - the earth magic, the fact that so many loyalties are questioned, the details, descriptions, the growth of Harry and Draco's powerful relationship, the cozy little cabin... just everything.

I apologize if this review is a bit scattered and a little incoherent... I'm having such a difficult time explaining how much I adore this story. It's beyond words. I'm literally speechless.

Just know that this is one of the most magnificent, beautifully written stories I've ever read. I cannot stress that enough.

That being said, I've found the eleventh chapter on FictionAlley, and I'm looking forward to see what will happen next. I love this story so much, and really, I cannot wait to see where you take it in the future.

Thank you so much for posting this exquisite piece of literature.

wow i am in love with your story! but the link for chapter 11 wont show the chapter. when i click "Resolution", all it shows is chapters 1-7.

hope you update soon! (even though it has been like... 3 years) keep up the good work (:

i absolutely loved this story when i read it a few years ago, and upon coming back to it now, i'm even more in love with it. there's so much depth to all of the characters here, and i love many of them here even more than in the books themselves. I noticed chapter 11 wasn't on the site here, nor is it on your website, and i was wondering if it was posted anywhere?

again, thank you for your amazing story, the mythology, story, and relationships are phenomenal.

AH! *dies*

You can't leave us like that! Lol, I know it's been just short of forever since there has been an update but I will sit in hope and waiting for a new chapter sometime... Because I'd love to see how this is going to play out.. It's been such an amazing story to read so far and I want to see the ending.

I do hope your ill health is maybe getting better, or at least not getting worse..Here's to hoping you get better (. and we get a chapter 12? :p)

woow this story is really amazing. It was really heartbreaking, when harry said, don't do that. and draco what? and harry answered, make me feel. wooow. this sencenteces ...really amazing. and how draco carried harry at the end of this chapter and his thougts about how light he was. amazing. really.

Wonderfully long and detailed. The switch back and forth between the guys - oh the anticipation.

I have a bit of trouble picturing Draco in yellow and red, besides the Gryff association, nobody looks good in a banana suit.

The conversations and internal musings are very well done.

uhm, you know there are only seven chapters at the link you gave here.

Anyway, I just wanted to tell you that this was my second read through your story and it's still one of my all-time favourites. I was completely unfamiliar with the concept of Harry/Draco-slash when I started reading your story a few years ago. I even think that it might have been one of my very first Harry Potter fanfics! I also read chapter 11 somewhere back then and I think I remember Draco and Harry returning to school, but Draco being unable to forgive Harry for the Marking he performed on him. That is a very frustrating point to stop the story, especially since you built such a profound base, both for Harry and Draco and for the big encounter with Voldemort that's sure to come.

I really do hope your health improves soon and you'll find the strength to write on.

You must be really sick if you are too weak to write - and have been sick for a while by the looks of it - which makes it kind of a void point to ask if what you have is serious. But I do pray for you to get well, even if there is little hope.

Keep you head up!

heidi

Okay, I feel I should say something about Glastonbury and the Chalice Well Gardens. I've been to both places and I was oddly disappointed because the energy there was weak at best. BUT there might be an explanation: I'm tuned to "continental" energy, more specific the energy of a certain geological part of Lower Austria, because I live there. Here, the ley-lines are thick and golden (yes, I can see them.) but in England they look thin and yellow to me. At Stonehenge there was at least a certain configuration to the stones. They are standing at a crossing, albeit not a big one (there are stronger spots around here every few kilometers). Also, though I can see the lines, I've rarely been able to FEEL them, let alone tune into them.

Back to Glastonbury: I tried to enhance my perception through using a divining rod but it was much too windy on the Tor for the use of such a delicate tool.

The Chalice Well Gardens were a place of great peace but nothing more.

I take it you've been to Glastonbury, too. How did you experience it?

Oh, and I am actually quite puzzled by the idea that "Malfoy Manor is on a ley-line" because these lines, the minor ones, are everywhere. You can take four, maybe five steps without crossing one, if you're lucky, but if you build a house, let alone a Manor, it's bound to be intersected by dozens of lines. Granted, they may not bee powerful, but they are still there. For the purpose of this story I'm going to assume you mean that Malfoy Manor is built at the crossing of MAJOR ley-lines, which is the basic characteristic of a power place.

Back to the story: It's really sad that Draco can't marry Gwen because they really make a nice pair and apart for not being in love (which could still develop between them) she has everything he could ever dream of. He could be happy with her - if Harry hadn't come into his life... But your story's not finished. I hope you'll be well enough soon to continue with it.

heidi

Why the heck does the portkey work suddenly? I though it wasn't supposed to function within Hogwarts!

heidi

Still here for whenever you are able to update.

this story was amazing i started by reading chapter 11 after have stumbled upon it it is fascinating and i wish to read more this is a link to the 11th chapter . and if you know where i can find more please to tell use the title as "more resolution"