Nice job.

this is so good ! keep writing

Aw. Butters has layers!

Seriously though, this is really sweet. You had me tearing up at the end there.

You really like to write about human behaviors. I enjoy reading your work.

People are uncomfortable and afraid to say the wrong thing after a death but even more uncomfortable after something like this.

I like how you discussed the issue from Butter's point of view. You made him really uncomfortable and unsure but he tried anyways.

You did a great job of writing the dialogue full of the pain and discomfort they were both feeling. Very impressive.!