"“Essex, you underestimate me. I am not a failure... I am the king of failures! But today…oh you got nothing on me today. Today I AM getting it right!”"

I still really like this story, after having read it years ago. It's got heart, it does. And this Bobby wormed his way into my head and heart with that line, I think. Thanks for sharing.

Marvelous. It was a bit difficult to tell who was talking in the scenes where everyone jumps in and interrupts each other, but overall it was great.

Really, really liked it. I like the whole 'X-men *can* be happy' idea!:)

Whoa...I was alternatly laughing out loud, shaking my head in admiration, and blinking away tears. Wow. Absolutomundostupendiosolousy great job! ...Especially that little touch at the end. Kudos! :)

I love reading stories where the X-Men are happy for a change. Well done it was really good, funny too.

10! See, It can be done. A great story where the X-Men are actually happy! I loved it. - Nadine