Where's kick-ass Hermione.
Lavender, not Lavander.

So, where's that sequel?

And of course the storyline gets cut off just as its gettin' really damned interesting...

"My Hufflepuffs know a genius of hard work when they see one and ceirtanly do not get jealous over success!" Pomonna sprout exclaimed indignantly displaying her strong white shiny teeth. "FOR NOTHING CAN STOP THE POWER OF YOUTH!"

I am inspired and appalled in equal measure...

YOSH!

Thumbs up for that Maito Gai reference!

Just fave me a very nagging plot bunny. Bloody hell.

The-one-who-is-plotting

K-H

So, I love this story, and I'm just now reviewing, but…
Oh, God, the omake…the omake…I just…I laughed so hard…
You. You are a truly amazing person.
That is all.

Interesting story. PLEASE find a beta! It's Gryffindor, NOT Gryffindoor, Gryffindor, Gryffinddor, or Griffendor! There are also several of/off them/they him/her and other problems spell-check won't catch.
Is Chang male or female? You have Him get mad, then She starts the fight...

Is Dumbles enchanting the mirror to suck Quirrelmort into it as a prison? because that is awesome!

God, your Harry sounds worse than JKRs.
Hermy might as well kill them all off and simply take over since she seems to be "perfect" and all the guys are jerks.

I love this story and have always thought it a pity it was never continued.

Really Good Story!

This is interesting and a nice read. You do however have a lot of spelling/grammatical errors and that makes it hard to read at times. You may wish to edit these last sixteen chapters or have someone do it for you before or while you do the sequel.

Aside from the usual fantastic content - one flaw. Sergeant I won't comment on, it's in the stated as spellcheck-free Omake, so: YAY! Gryffindor with the singular O! YES!

*coughs*

So . . . yep. Yays! And Muchas Gracias for posting!

- M.

GryffindOr. One 'O'.

'pronciple'. I take it you meant 'principle'?

Dark witch Hermione trap? Very of the brill.

Many thanks,

- M.