Great scene.

My computer is working again, praise God! :)

I really enjoyed this, even though I don't watch Fringe. I like the way you captured Peter's thoughts about the very strange very difficult situation he finds himself in.

Great work as always! And I look forward to the SN fic you're working on. :)

Ani-maniac494

I do not agree that this sucked. There was not a whole lot of Peter showing in the dialogue, but there really was not much dialogue. It was well written though and I certainly hope that the show does not go this way. The premise was beleivable though and really was touching. I loved the parts where Peter wondered what originalPeter would have been like, how it affected Walter, the interaction between Peter and walter was so sad. Please give yourself more credit!

Wow. I love this. I actually do love your Peter, I think you write him really well.

The ending was just... wow.

Ohh, I like this. It was a bit ... ramble-y? but it definitely made its point. Aw now I'm sad. Someone on an episode discussion thread made a comment about how Peter will probably be the key in stopping the colliding universes by going back to his world, and now I'm kinda dreading and yet loving the idea. So much angst!

Dark.

Dark is good.

This is good.

Don't be so hard on this piece, its good.