This is a great story, in my honest opinion!

I loved the detail, and the whole thing with Leia becoming a human to be with Jack is very sweet and well done!

I don't have much to complain about! Keep up the good work!

Things that make you go aw

It was no doubt a big decision for Leia to make. But I'm glad it all worked out for her in the end.

Good luck in the contest.

Entry Verified. I like the premise, and I think you executed it pretty well. Good luck in the contest!

This was so cute, I thoroughly enjoyed it. It reminded me slightly of the little mermaid and not in a bad way at that.

It was a great idea contest or not. (:

I love this! _ It's such a clever and brilliant use of the theme. Also, it's reminded me how much I love the character of Leia...

Good luck in the contest!

Entry verified!

For some reason, reading this reminding me of a storybook. Like one of those magical fairy tales I read when I was younger. _

I'm really glad someone wrote a story like this, too, because it's an awesome idea.

Good luck in the contest!

Peace and Love

That was so sweet! I'm glad you chose to write about Leia, because I always love when people write about underrated characters in games! :) And Leia happens to be one of my favorites anyways!

Is anyone allowed to enter the Village Square contest? I have an idea already in my head! :)