 thomas keable 12/6/11 . chapter 43 i can wait under tile you do chapter 44 |
 Grava 7/24/11 . chapter 43please update, this is a great story and I want to read more.
the next book in the Inheritance Cycle is coming out in November, its called Inheritance. |
 ashrk95 7/13/11 . chapter 43i love this story! this is one of the best fanfics i have EVER READ! its awesome! i cant wait for your next chapter! _ |
 Demicat 1/25/11 . chapter 43love this story, it keeps pulling you in -D.C. |
 Calil Gadien96 1/12/11 . chapter 1I really like this story. I'm only reviewing on chapter 1 because I forgot what chap. I stopped reading at sometime last year.
I love IC, and I love LOTR, And I love this story. And I thought I could ignore it, but unfortunately for me, I could not. When you get done with this, (obviously you don't have to, but if you wanted to) if you could/would write one similar, but with no mpreg or slash, it would be really really cool. Or I could just ignore it and continue/start over reading this story.
Keep writing
Cal |
 Kamikaze duck 11/17/10 . chapter 1Rather a shame that someone must corrupt the potential of a good story with slash concepts. |
 dragons chaotica 10/14/10 . chapter 43Yay! Another wonderful chapter! Glad to see someones out of the coma suffering from. I'm still trying to fight my writers block. |
 anon 10/14/10 . chapter 43 Can i just say that I've spent almost a whole entire day reading your story from chapter 1 to 43! It's EPIC! Can't wait for the update! |
 Not Yet Knowing 10/13/10 . chapter 43Thxs...Gimli my man...didn't disappoint me... |
 HellzCrusader 10/13/10 . chapter 43awesome! i'm glad that gimli and legolas finally got back together again, those two are a pair XD hard to keep them in the same story but never together in the same place.
awesome chapter, and you did an awesome job with the council language. to be honest, i hate writing that sort of formal stuff myself XD
if you'd like some good examples of it though, check out Cassia and Siobhan's work both here and at their website, the Mellon Chronicles. assuming that you have not already had the pleasure of already reading their work.
the website is aragorn-legolas . 5u . com
minus spaces ;) |
 thomas keable 9/30/10 . chapter 42 i cant wait under tile you chapter 43 |
 HellzCrusader 9/22/10 . chapter 42huzzah! awesome job :) as always Itar. |
 Not Yet Knowing 9/22/10 . chapter 42DUDE!...G day has passed...now for the day i have been waiting for...the reunion...holds breathe... |
 Not Yet Knowing 9/13/10 . chapter 41Finally ... Bere is gonna see someone from Gondor and Legolas is gonna see someone he knows!...The beginning of the end? |
 dragons chaotica 9/2/10 . chapter 40Exellent, per usual. A few minor spelling errors, the wrong tense or a plural where there shouldn't be one. But other than that, it's wonderous. |