This one is pretty fun, thanks for the read. Sorry to see it is an abandoned project, but it was well enough a read left as is.

Nother good story, I very much enjoy your style of writing!

As much as I like this I wish you'd separate the paragraphs and the times when another speaker has something to say.

While this story and Son Turned Daughter seem clearly, most sincerely dead (sorry, couldn't resist) I have to admire the way they were written. I'm a huge fan of Ranma-chan stories in general, and these two are particularly compelling.

I've seen a lot of similar stories, but you write better than most people that I've read from, and the little 4th wall breaking humor moments really make a huge difference in the tone in a good way.

While I'm guessing you have absolutely no intention to continue either story, I'd love to see more, since they are very well done.

Enjoyed your story and hope you come back to it sometime in the future.

The idea of Cologne, Shampoo and Mousse becoming a part of the Saotome household the way Ranma and Genma became part of the Tendo household in canon is extraordinarily compelling. The interplay between the Amazon contingent and the Saotomes strikes me as genuine and heartfelt.

With Ryouga on the way and the addition of Ami and Usagi, it looks like quite the support net of caring friends and family is being woven for Ranma. Quite a refreshing twist after reading fic after fic of Ranma being more or less sh*t upon by everyone in his life in an endless series of trite angstfests. It becomes tiresome after thirty or forty of these fics in a row.

I see that your author profile and latest stories have been updated as recently as the middle of 2008, so I will hold on to hope that you might come back and revisit this fine story.

On a related note, I noted another comment which stated that chapters 5 and 6 (likely in draft form) of this story had been posted on another site which now seems to have disappeared. Is there any way you could post these chapters for us to read or, at least, send me copies of them?

I look forward to reading more now that you're back on the scene!

this is a good story. would you please continue

UPDATE

great story

Excellent fic. Please, please, please continue writing.

I enjoyed this story very much. Hopefully, you will come back to it soon.

"Here, you can have some of mine," Ranko offered. "I had a big breakfast and mom made me lots."

Here mom should be capitalized, as it's used in place of a name.

Great story!

Ivan

Is this going to be a Ranma becomes a senshi fic? Or maybe Ranma will become an honorary senshi, fighting with the scouts but not transforming into one. Will you have Ranma be cured or maybe matched up with Ryoga or Mu Tsu. Genma is one of my least favorite characters and he should get his, maybe the senshi will mistake him for a youma at first. If a costumed Ranko is in that fight it could be cathartic. I love what you have written so far, keep up the good work.

ntresting ...

hey so far a great story with lotsa humor, but why havent you updated recentally have you given up working on the story?"