please,please,please update is is one of the greatest ha! fanfic i ever read and i will love to have an update to know how helga and arnold get home! 3 D (THIS STORY IS AWESOME)
Wow, well, for someone who's never watched more than five minutes of Naruto, I have to say I'm loving this fic. If I ever do watch or read the series, I'll probably be really disappointed that Casana-chan doesn't actually exist. I love her and Deidara together, they're so cute! And of course, Arnold and Helga are just bursting with adorable. I can't wait to see more of this! 3
I don't actually watch naruto, so I've been putting off checking this story out, but boredom finally won over. And its good. Who knows, maybe with your help I'll actually find myself able to stand the obnoxious little brat. hahaha
Yes! The Cheese Festival! CHEESY! XD Sorry, I just got such joy from reading that. XD Oh, cheese.
And oh my gosh, possibly my FAVORITE part of this WHOLE chapter! XD
"Oh no... Not the dumbass!"
*Laughs hysterically* Oh, man, I think I'm in love with Tobi! Deidara's reactions were absolutely hilarious! And Tobi sounds... Oh, I'm not even going to try and pretend. He reminds me of a squirrel, plain and simple. XD
"Fancy running into you guys here! Wow! What a small world! This is so cool! So how are you guys? What are you doing? Where are you going? Ooh! Are you two finally together? Are you married? Did you have kids?"
AHAHAHAHAHA! YEEEES! I LOVE characters like that! He's awesome! Send him a kiss for me! XD
Oh, and about Deidara's cousin, before I forget. EVERY SINGLE TIME her pet cat just randomly said "Meow!" I started laughing like mad for like five minutes. Took me a LONG time to finally get through all those meows. XD It was awesome!
Okay, seriously now, I just KNEW the festival was going to be an epic milestone for Arnold and Helga and Deidara and Casana. All the lovesick Arnold was just so PRECIOUS! *Coos* And the whole Casana and Deidara making out, and then Deidara backing her into a corner about it. XD AH! When she exploded in his face about loving him, JUST like Helga, I nearly died. LOL!
This was simply spectacular, so far. I just knew this chapter was going to be A-MAY-ZING! Total scrumdiliumptiosness! _ _ _ It had humor, drama, romance, and two epic love confessions all tied together with a squirrel! Oh, the splendor! *Sighs*
Well, update when ya can, buddy o' mine! This just made my night! Well, now I'd better go finish up some Science crap. *Good mood is immediately gone* Bye-bye. XD
Yay! We finally made it to the romance! :D I just hope we have a little time for some smooches before the bad guys come barging in. And the chocolate head thing was funny. XD And of course, Arnold and Helga's reactions to seeing each other all attractified up. Gotta love the love. Arnold is so cute when he's smitten and doesn't even know it. I just know that the next chapter is going to be good. :D
So far, I can't decide, even after 28 chapters, if I really love this fic or not. Don't get me wrong or anything, I love the Helga/Arnold parts, but I'm seriously having some issues with some of the OOCness of some of the characters. Also, I'm not sure I'm really liking the OC's as much, I know that there will always be the need to add characters to a story when it takes an original turn, but I think that your females especially (Casana) are really suffering because of (and I hate using this term, but I feel like I have to be straightforward) several 'sue' like qualities. I feel like in a way that it's hurting your story, detracting away from Arnold and Helga, because I have to focus on this 'new' character and her 'god like' power.
Other than that 'glaring' issue, I really do like your writing, and the way that you write ArnoldxHelga, it's just I'm not quite sure if this is your best work.
dredfully regretting her critical honesty,
A.B.
ps, I'll still watch to find out what happens, because I am obnoxiously curious.
Holy crap! Where the heck have I been? How the heck long has THIS been up? Geez, I can't believe I missed this!
Okay, first things first, YAY! *Squeals* Festival, festival, festival! :D :D :D :D :D
XD Okay, next: super excited for what's going to HAPPEN at the festival. I suspect it will be awesome at first, but then something horrible is going to happen. I don't know whether to jump for joy or run in terror. *Shrugs* Either way works, I suppose. But still... LOVE! :D
There's going to be romance... *giggles* Ugh, I can be such a girl sometimes. I gotta get over that. *Clears throat* But back on topic, the little talk between Casana and Arnold was sad but nice. They really are nearly exactly the same, aren't they? XD That's creepy. But I like it. _
I also love Arnold and Helga teaming up all sneakily like that. Heh heh heh. That's so like Helga in some ways. XD
But oh no! EVIL! D8 I just know that something bad is going to happen soon. I just know it.
And dude, so many fillers! D: I just don't know what to do anymore! How do you people survive through watching this anime stuff? It's nuts! D: D: D:
Well, update soon! I'm feeling kinda spacey in the head, so I'd better stop while I'm ahead. *Passes out*
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