I'm not sure if I could just let him go. I'm glad I wasn't Edward in that instant. I probably would have killed him.

Wow, this story was very simple but so powerful at the same time. Its something that I have also thought about from time to time and the difficulties these situations would cause Edward and I feel that you have done a wonderful job at pulling the idea into words and story lines. Most people that have read Twilight over look or don't think much about his past other then to say thats its over now but if you think about it, his past is what makes him act the way he does. Great story I love your work!

This was very nice. It made for good thinking material.

This is the first of your stories that I've read and I am thoroughly impressed. This is fantastic writing and such an in-depth perception of Edward's thoughts.

i havent put much thought to what they as the cullens all see and maybe how helpless they can feel because at times they cant do anything as to not alert anyone of what they are.. must be hard...kinda when edward walked away from the guys that were trying to do shit to bella in twilight.. really enjoyed reading this :)

Well that's depressing. But then I suppose life isn't always sunshine, is it? Very well written, and, of course, a quite unexpected ending.

powerful,sadness makes you think how reading minds isnt what its cracked up to be .

That was intriguing.

:o)

A very good story. This is definitely a dilemma I could see Edward being very uncomfortable with. Good writing!

I was reading you fanfic called "A world without sound en español" when I realized you've stopped writting. why ? I was graet, please I beg you to continue it. please, please I was in the best part. Kisses from one of your readers

loved it :D

I wish there was a way he could have saved Sara...wonderfully written story about Edward pre Twilight...

Poor Edward... Very well written,(L).

This was an interesting insight in to Edwards life before Bella came along. Keep up the good work!

Wow. I absolutely loved this. It was short but you captured Edward's inner turmoil perfectly. I miss in-character Edward... There aren't many of those lately...

Anyway, thank you for a lovely read!

xo, goldenhair