I know there's no hope of you updating, seeing as how you haven't for the past... what? 9 years? I don't see the point of doing this... but please, please, please update?

Please continue!

This is really growing on me... their relaionship and the situations you place them in are original and work quite well...

Please continue to write more and update soon!

I'd love to see more

-Reads the part about the gas station robbery and cracks up!- Oh, man! Its like a scene out of family guy!(is referencing the episode where byran sold rupert stewies bear, to a family on their way to aspen, and they -stewie and bryan- using a starting pistol carjacks a random motorist). This chapter is love!

Wasn't Figg a squib in canon? Unable to use magic?

sorrrry, you did never go on with this interesting fic

still a wonderful story, I like it, even if it is not finished.

Stumbled upon this story and seeing as it's been a few years since you updated, so I think it's safe you say you won't continue. But nonetheless, I enjoyed your story thus far!

UPDATE! I LOVE this story. It is so good. Please update. :D

get story so far cant wait to read the next chapter i domt like that matt guy harry should have turned him into a fish n_n

Off to a good start! I see that you haven't updated anything for the past few years, and I hope that you haven't abandoned the world of fanfiction altogether!

Your description of Severus was very good, and I could see him quite plainly in my mind's eye. Good work!

I love the story so far. Are you going to keep writing it?

Hello

I know this is an old story, but was it ever continued? I like what I read so far

update soon

Wonderful. It was very exciting and emotional at times. I enjoyed reading it very much. Thanx for writing it! _

-IJedi

I know this is an old story and you may not care anymore but you did ask for constructive criticism. You use the word 'assumed' when talking about Severus when it should be 'resumed'.

Good first chapter!