UPDATE! I LOVE this story. It is so good. Please update. :D

get story so far cant wait to read the next chapter i domt like that matt guy harry should have turned him into a fish n_n

Off to a good start! I see that you haven't updated anything for the past few years, and I hope that you haven't abandoned the world of fanfiction altogether!

Your description of Severus was very good, and I could see him quite plainly in my mind's eye. Good work!

I love the story so far. Are you going to keep writing it?

Hello
I know this is an old story, but was it ever continued? I like what I read so far

update soon

Wonderful. It was very exciting and emotional at times. I enjoyed reading it very much. Thanx for writing it! ^_^

-IJedi

I know this is an old story and you may not care anymore but you did ask for constructive criticism. You use the word 'assumed' when talking about Severus when it should be 'resumed'.

Good first chapter!

-Damned! It quit when I was thoroughly enjoying it. Update soon please. I actually enjoyed the fact that you made Ms Figg likeable and then killed her off. Thanks

Please write again. Three years... you abandoned it, didn't you? :(

I LOVE SIRIUS!

I love the way Mrs. Figg got Severus to show his injury.

What a wonderful story, very interesting and riveting. It isn't ifnished, you know,I'm waiting for more,please!!

That was really a story! I wish you would add more! The star Wars thing was priceless!

I rly got addicted to ur story! One of my favorite moments in it was when Harry was conjuring his inner lion to confront snape: 'roar, roar.' 'the lion went into hiding' XD Anyways, even tho Snape was drunk, this chapter was touching...I hope u update soon tho...plz. :)