Temari wins lets just skip the fight.

LMFAO hilarious ending.

Didn't you mean three kids? (Naruto, Anko, and Hinata)

Sentence structure is getting worse and the plot is getting a little messy. You also forgot to leave what Subsonic was going to give to Kushina.

I got confused by your explanation about his clans committing incest or inbreeding. I didn't quite get it. Nvm. I'll read along. I'm sure this fic won't reach after Naruto's children's era

Wow and I thought giving Naruto a fusion of the Sharingan, Rinnegan, and Byakugan was overpowering especially with Kurama, and summoning contracts for the Toads and Dragons.

Okay I like Orochimaru better as a good guy

Oh no Danzo. You know I admit that Sasuke does the greatest good by killing him.

Imagine how zabuza would react if he saw this.
He would either use the hidden mist jutsu or lob all their heads off.

Nice story and its my first time readinb konoha being invaded by sannin and naruto of all people. Really nice one. But it wasn't show yet how naruto can be and how strong is his control over his bloodline line and more war to go.

I see 7 girls not 8.

So who's the eighth girl?

this is a really interesting take on the naruto series. i love it

...Were the burglars based off the ones from Home Alone?

Ayume for num 10

Ayame, Ino, and Karinare good choices.