 awesomelyme29 9/26/10 . chapter 1nice :D |
 GreenCanary 7/13/10 . chapter 1lol funny |
 The Thrush That Can't Fly 6/12/10 . chapter 1Oh those chillen...
8D. Simply hilarious. |
 vampire-fanfiction 6/4/10 . chapter 1its good and funny please keep |
 MrsMajorJ 4/19/10 . chapter 1As a parent of 3 little ones, I so feel their pain! Thankfully, they do get old enough to go outside to play by themselves, eventually! |
 aem91 4/18/10 . chapter 1LOL I LOVE IT ! YOU SHOULD WRITE THAT CROTHLESS STORY ! LOL I HAVE TEARS ! |
 breanna1027927 4/18/10 . chapter 1hahaha that is hilarious lmao |
 JasperLuver48 4/13/10 . chapter 1you're amazing lol this was so cute and funny and probably the way every man in america acts, never wanting to take care of business with the children while 'taking care of business' with the wife LOL :) great job and super cute! |
 TwilightGuru09 3/10/10 . chapter 1Oh my God!Oh my God! Oh my God! Oh my God!
If i laughed any harder, I would have poped an eyeball. My kids were looking at me asking me to read it aloud. (12 &7) Figured i would avoid the therapy charges myself. I love Carlisle the Horndog! |
 Ocgirlygirl 2/22/10 . chapter 1hahaha thats frekin funny! |
 Savannah-Vee 2/11/10 . chapter 1Lol! Love it, love it, love it! That was so good, and so hot! SDC is such a DILF! |
 tyrablu 2/9/10 . chapter 1Well done chica. Now if they could have only continued hahahaha. lol |
 Veggie-Vampire90 2/9/10 . chapter 1 well written, funny and also cute... liked it so much! |
 Mari Rosier 2/9/10 . chapter 1HAHA loved! "Wearing crotchless underwear is the reason Alice is here today." LOL :DD
Really good fic, congrats o/ |
 mw138 2/9/10 . chapter 1Aw! Poor Edward. lol I love reading about Esme's and SDC's relationship! Good job! :) |