Fantastic story. You really nailed Jeff's voice here. I like how you ended it, too, kind of ambiguous but with that ray of hope. Very cool.

-Nick

Very beautifully written. The story flowed nicely and you pretty much nailed the characters. I love Jeff/Annie. The chemistry and the sweetness beween them is amazing.

You must continue this story!

I hope you post more. I love these two together. They are so cute together, despit the age gap.

I loved this story, and would love to see it continued, if that's what you had in mind. As for the reviewer before me, who's to say that Jeff didn't buy the car shortly before he got disbarred?

Again, I loved this story, and would love to see more Jeff/Annie stories from you in the future. If it's not continuing this one, then at least some more short stories, thank you :)

You know, in a major plot hole for the series, in many states, you don't actually need a college degree to practice law, you simply need to have passed The Bar test, proving you have sufficient knowledge to practice law...

On a side note, why wouldn't Jeff own his car? What would have happened to all the money he made as a lawyer? Its not like he had exorbitant college fees to pay back...