|Reviews for Momentai|
| MagicalHalliwell 11/9/11 . chapter 1
*teary eyed* That was so beautiful.
Henry is my favorite Tamer and I love Terriermon too.
Henry may have scolded Terriermon but he loved him a lot, you could see that in his reactions when Gargomon first evolved to Rapidmon and whenever Terriermon got hurt. They make a great team.
| stars.everlasting 6/15/10 . chapter 1
Awww...that was so kawaii :3
| Ris Fallon 2/24/10 . chapter 1
"I remember how you always used to be here, / I remember your voice. / It whispers in the wind now, I hear it everyday."
I think those are quite possibly my favorite lines. They really resonate, and I feel like the rest of the poem sort of revolves around this idea, like echoing memories carried on the wind.
| Toshiku Yumari 2/15/10 . chapter 1
This is really nice, I like the way you wrote it. It fits all kinds of emotions, and really sounds like something Henry would say/write. Nice work. :)
| Anonymous 2/11/10 . chapter 1
FYI... there are no such things as "super drabbles". Drabbles are short challenge fics that depending on the writer could be 100 words exactly - or anything under 500-10 words. The word you are looking for is "one-shot" for a non-chaptered story longer than that, or "ficlet" if it's still a short story. Just to mention :) On that note, poetry doesn't usually count as drabbles anyway from what I've seen since poems are structured differently from actual fanfics.
Nicely written though.