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Reviews for: The Lesson
wandamarie 9/13/09 . chapter 1
wow it was a good one thank you
Natta 4/25/03 . chapter 3
this story is so sweet and funny at the same time! I'm going to see i you've written anything else.
Ivory Tower 1/16/03 . chapter 3
Wonderful story! I can't say enough good things about it! A most enjoyable read!
Queen of Duels 10/20/02 . chapter 3
I like it! Keep up the Great work! _
Ionna 3/25/02 . chapter 3
I'm sorry, but you lost me with chapter two. In chapter one we see two very young hobbits up to misschief (and since Bilbo is still around it means that Pippin can't be more than eleven!) and in chapter two both young miscreants get out for... a pint of beer?

But luckily chapter three has gotten us on the right track again. I like chapter three. I like the 'parental' side of Gandalf and I'm glad that Pippin isn't afraid of the powerful wizard, but instead feels safe with him (so I'm a big mushbal, so sue me :-)
Azaelia 2/24/02 . chapter 2
LOL Very good work! *Kicks Pansy for Merry* :-) Keep it up!
Ionna 1/29/02 . chapter 1
Now why do I have the feeling that those oddly shaped stones will turn up again, turn out to be far more than just stones and cause a heap of trouble? :-)
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