|Reviews for Yesternight|
| deenerneener 2/9/10 . chapter 1
Whoa, what a wild start! I hope Carlisle survives; I thought he was a goner here, already. Since he hasn't been dispatched yet, perhaps he stays around, too?
I'll be interested to see how this story unfolds.
| starfish422 2/9/10 . chapter 1
Ooh! Pasty P, I'm so glad I saw your tweet about this, bb. :) Very glad you've begun some vampy slash! Looking forward to reading on as new chapters are available.
| katinki 2/9/10 . chapter 1
Sigh. Look what you've done to me. I don't read slash. I don't. (Ok, maybe like a couple of O/S's but they don't count). I can't promise that I will stay with you... but I will... attempt it... lol. You didn't disappoint me w/ Jazz despite my initial apprehension (rather the opposite)... so I will be brave.
I like how you are using the vignette approach. I thought that worked very well with the Cowboys. It allows you to progress through time rapidly and allows you to *not* share every little detail. It keeps the reader on her toes, forces us to pay attention since you've only included what you really want us to read (ie no filler).
As always, your word choice is interesting, unique, and colorful. You paint lovely pictures, easily visible and imaginable to the reader.
"Edward slumped to his knees, eyes squeezing shut as he fingers caught chunks of grass. " - I loved this. Very visual and "interesting". I liked the 'chunks of grass'.
I had to chuckle a sec at voyeuristic Edward peeping in on "la puta y el gordo". Interesting little tidbit...not absolutely necessary but these types of snippets add a certain richness to the story.
Fine, fine action scene there at toward the end. Your characters were dancing in my head; I could easily picture it all.
Your plot is intriguing, I must admit. I'm very interested to see where this goes.
Thanks for writing.
| Lisalove83 2/9/10 . chapter 1
I hope they let Carlisle go! I don't like seeing Carlisle die...nononononononono.
But so good! Can't wait for more :)
| Kimberlesk 2/9/10 . chapter 1
Count me in, I'm intrigued!
| I'mwiththevampires08 2/9/10 . chapter 1
This is definitely a win in my book! You must keep going. I would love to see where you go with this. Boy love just gets me all sorts of excited!
| vampireisthenewblack 2/9/10 . chapter 1
I am so looking forward to this! This chapter was brilliant, all the action! It was easy to follow what was going on, which isn't always the case. Very nice, and yay for vampslash!
| americnxidiot 2/9/10 . chapter 1
I'm very very excited about this one. This was such an interesting first chapter, and as always your writing is descriptive and lovely, even when you're describing something grotesque. Yes, excited.
| clairdeluneisgreat 2/9/10 . chapter 1
wonderful start. Looking forward to more of this!
| RogueNLogan 2/9/10 . chapter 1
What a fantastic beginning! I am so looking forward to seeing where you take this!
| mistyhaze420 2/9/10 . chapter 1
I'm really liking this so far. I hope you continue soon!
| Alexis.Danaan 2/9/10 . chapter 1
That was great! I can't wait to see where you take this! Good on you!