Hos Susan the Gentle the onle Daughter of Eve and Adam left?D:

*Crys.*

Lovely.

Nice. It would be interesting to expand, but it's good as an experiment, too, just the way it is.

I have to say, though, I think Susan has Dumbledore beat as far as impressiveness goes.

Also, not to undermine the value of this piece, please do update O What a Tangled Web, preferably soon, but really whenever you're ready. Thanks!

You create quite a somber mood. This is a masterpiece.

OSK

Heartbreakingly brilliant. Good character match too.

My heart was crying. That's how it felt anyway. It was so sad, but so...Beautiful. You're a very gifted author, just to let you know.

It i Completely Perfect. It's Magic.

Mercy.

oh this is so sad but at the same tine strangly happy in a way i love how you portrayed the charactors such a grat story :)

This was excellent. Thank you for writing this fic!

That was suprisingly good... Even if it was just a summer, a weird friendship, to both of them it must have meaned something ot finally have somebody to talk...

Well done!

Sad and lovely and so sad. Beautifully written as always, but I prefer Into the Dream. It's happier, a bit. :)

A lovely story. One small nit: the Professor's house had been destroyed (how, "The Last Battle" doesn't say - maybe a German bomb during World War II after the children's visit?) by the time of the railway accident that took the lives of Susan's family and left her alone. But it's not that important.

Heart-wrenching. Beautiful. Elegant. Unbelievably complicated in a way the utterly befits both characters, compared to the understated way you delivered it. So many layers, and so believable. I can't thank you enough for posting it, but at the same time, it was painful to read their suffering at once.

Brilliant.

Stel xx