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1 10/14/12 . chapter 4 continue |
Billieeillib 9/28/11 . chapter 4 Continue continue continue continue continue continue continue... Should I go on... |
charmed-darkangel 2/15/11 . chapter 4CONTINUE! Definitely continue, this story is too good to be ditched! Don't let the lack of reviews discourage you, as long as you're enjoying writing this then keep doing it, eventually it will pay off! Besides, posting it is better than the plot keeping on jumping in your mind all day, or writing it and leaving it on the shelf (or a folder if you type on a pc). |
charmed-darkangel 2/15/11 . chapter 3Lightning? huh, interesting to see that in your story, but you seriously have to tell me about your semi-obsession with it ;) Ah the truth out so early? I would've loved it if the secret was kept a little longer (I am a fan of secrets in stories btw) but we'll see how this plays out! Really like the last fighting scene! So Kat's God powers are draining her human body... very nice idea. Glad to see an evil person with morals, love how you made Cronos not attack Kat because he was proud of her choice to stand by her family to death! Great chapter! |
charmed-darkangel 2/15/11 . chapter 2I love P F Chengs, in fact I just had lunch there today! Can I suggest you remove the links from the chapter and post them on your profile instead, because 1) they're not displayed correctly, 2) they kinda just cut the train of thoughts. Good chapter, Kat's story line is really intriguing, specially with that pain thing going on! |
charmed-darkangel 2/15/11 . chapter 1Very interesting start! I though Kat was magical the moment you mentioned she took the news of Demons and Witches well. Is this story going to be Billie centric? |
Belinda 2/4/11 . chapter 4 Continue I like this story |
lizardmomma 2/12/10 . chapter 3Very cool, a demi-god with my name...So I wonder how she'll explain this one. |
lizardmomma 2/11/10 . chapter 2nice start |