Reviews for Water girl and Fire boy
Jose Miguel 12/4/12 . chapter 1
very good your love story, I want a sequel or if you can multiple and increasingly are nearer kiss, if you can recommend me other love stories of fire and water, like a video or a fanfic, I appreciate it, but that than the following video:
watch?vOLZJ-E2CWuw
because it's so sad, I want one with a happy ending or at least the two lovers are still alive, but equally noteworthy that in alight along, that's all, I love your love story of fire and water, XD.
moonlightnight1 11/6/12 . chapter 1
good story
some body 7/30/12 . chapter 1
jutsu, is the most less likely pairing that would happen in the canon... but also the cutest crack to me... so that was awesome story, thx for the read
noname1515 6/30/12 . chapter 1
Yes you may call it the Jutsu-pairing (love the shipping name :D) but anyway now to the business, well the review.

Couldn't find any typos, grammar mistakes or spelling errors.
I enjoyed reading your story.
It started in-character but with the flow of the story both of them kinda turned out to be OOC but really they were so cute and "clumsy" at the end because of the OOC-ness that I don't really mind it. :)
aca chan 6/1/12 . chapter 1
umm, excuse me, I want to ask ..

fairy tail stories that once I read the title 'Tale of the white flame' in the clear it?

pity really, the story is that I like

why removed ?
PiWrite 3/7/12 . chapter 1
aww good job :)

it's cute and it re-enforces my science knowledge :D
The PhantomHokage 8/6/11 . chapter 1
Really great story I really liked it
OceanixEclipse92 7/31/11 . chapter 1
Wow this is great. I'm on a Fairy Tail crack spree and I was disappointed that this is a one shot and that you have only one story with this couple. Anyway great job. Gonna go read the others now. )
alkizor 4/18/11 . chapter 1
wow two firsts and it is great
Prusyah 4/14/11 . chapter 1
Omg, this really was a cute story!
Reaper7 3/25/11 . chapter 1
That... was very cute actually. Though you don't use english much, I understand most of what was happening. I thought it was sweet!
Mooooore please 3/11/11 . chapter 1
That can't be all...for great justice you must continue please
Ghengriya 12/17/10 . chapter 1
You gonna update this anytime soon, that was great. I see a lot of potential in this story.
Hana 'natsu' Mitsuzaka 12/4/10 . chapter 1
waw!

so sweet!

i never expected that...JuviaNatsu will be that sweet.

aah, only that i can say. good fict, shima. just like you always.

keep writing:)
lightAGITO 4/16/10 . chapter 1
Em, 1shot?

Hihihii

Good
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