| Reviews for Water girl and Fire boy |
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Jose Miguel 12/4/12 . chapter 1 very good your love story, I want a sequel or if you can multiple and increasingly are nearer kiss, if you can recommend me other love stories of fire and water, like a video or a fanfic, I appreciate it, but that than the following video: watch?vOLZJ-E2CWuw because it's so sad, I want one with a happy ending or at least the two lovers are still alive, but equally noteworthy that in alight along, that's all, I love your love story of fire and water, XD. |
moonlightnight1 11/6/12 . chapter 1good story |
some body 7/30/12 . chapter 1 jutsu, is the most less likely pairing that would happen in the canon... but also the cutest crack to me... so that was awesome story, thx for the read |
noname1515 6/30/12 . chapter 1Yes you may call it the Jutsu-pairing (love the shipping name :D) but anyway now to the business, well the review. Couldn't find any typos, grammar mistakes or spelling errors. I enjoyed reading your story. It started in-character but with the flow of the story both of them kinda turned out to be OOC but really they were so cute and "clumsy" at the end because of the OOC-ness that I don't really mind it. :) |
aca chan 6/1/12 . chapter 1 umm, excuse me, I want to ask .. fairy tail stories that once I read the title 'Tale of the white flame' in the clear it? pity really, the story is that I like why removed ? |
PiWrite 3/7/12 . chapter 1aww good job :) it's cute and it re-enforces my science knowledge :D |
The PhantomHokage 8/6/11 . chapter 1Really great story I really liked it |
OceanixEclipse92 7/31/11 . chapter 1 Wow this is great. I'm on a Fairy Tail crack spree and I was disappointed that this is a one shot and that you have only one story with this couple. Anyway great job. Gonna go read the others now. ) |
alkizor 4/18/11 . chapter 1wow two firsts and it is great |
Prusyah 4/14/11 . chapter 1Omg, this really was a cute story! |
Reaper7 3/25/11 . chapter 1That... was very cute actually. Though you don't use english much, I understand most of what was happening. I thought it was sweet! |
Mooooore please 3/11/11 . chapter 1 That can't be all...for great justice you must continue please |
Ghengriya 12/17/10 . chapter 1 You gonna update this anytime soon, that was great. I see a lot of potential in this story. |
Hana 'natsu' Mitsuzaka 12/4/10 . chapter 1waw! so sweet! i never expected that...JuviaNatsu will be that sweet. aah, only that i can say. good fict, shima. just like you always. keep writing:) |
lightAGITO 4/16/10 . chapter 1 Em, 1shot? Hihihii Good |