So.. sad! But also, quite sweet. I liked the one line.. what was it? "Know that somewhere, somehow, I'll never forget you. I don't regret our time together..."

Ah, it reminds me of my first heartbreak. Probably doesn't sound like a good thing, but it is, because my first heartbreak is also my best friend.

.. Okay, enough reminiscing; I'm sure no one here wants to hear my life story.

In short, this story is bittersweet and I love it. I applaud you. *applauds*

This is really good. I think it would make a cool prologue. I hope you decide to write some more. :D

it is not bad at all, however, I felt that you should have added a little more detail to spice it up a bit...

I wish there were more explanation or back story, but it's not at all badly written.

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