I like the ash wants to be the best and forgets himself sorta fics. Will u be making more?

Take a think butthole Ash! Ash really crossed the egotistic line there. You're makin him become a pain. Bye Byeee Ash! Hello Pile Of Ash! Good job, but it was a little painful.

InheriM

very sad... :'(

but it RAWWWWX my stripey sox XD _

awesome fic, are u gonna make it a 2-shot? please do! :)

/Anonymodude ;)/

awesome :) Quite sad for Ash / lol

-AshXDawn4Ever-

you should write a sequel to that!

Well, that wasn't nice :( It was sad!

You should probably put "hurt" as a genre too.

Good job on this story! It was sad yet good. No... it was AWESOME!Ok. Keep up the awesome job.

Good to know your not giving up yet!

And that was...so...sad :'(

Yet so good...Keep it up!

Ace

IT GREAT BUT HATE THAT ASH HAVE EGO PROBLEMS