I finally broke down and read this poem, and it sounds like somethink that Akara would write to Raistlin. I like it.

Wow...sounds like something that Akara would have written Raistlin on one of her visits...

Even though it was written before she ever appeared, this poem feels like it was written by Akara, especially the last line. It's like she's toying with him when she ends with that, just daring him to react somehow. I am seriously wondering if you wrote this as an exercise while creating her, or if it inspired her, because it wasn't written *that* long before she appeared and it is so like something she would leave pinned to him in his sleep or stuck in one of his books :D

RAISTLIN RULES! GO RAISTLIN! YAY! *huggles Raistlin* he's da best, isn't he? DIE ALL EVIL TASSLEHOFF FANS! *death glare* RED ROBES RULE SUPREME! *realises that Raistlin is now a black robe* oh, bugger. *grins possessively*

I do not like Raistlin too much cause of what he did to Crysania, but I do like this poem!

Very nice work. I applaud!

Back off, he's mine... Nice poem, though.

The essence is there... but if it's supposed to be morbid... er... I don't think it comes quite close to that... Gomen...

That was good. You really did a good job ast portraying Raistlin. Goodluck with anything else you do.