This was really good.

It was nice to read a story that didn't involve Rorschach getting hurt all the time and then relying upon Daniel.

I like the idea of a scar/burn for Daniel and liked the phrase 'he couldn't take it off and hang it up and go upstairs; pretend it didn't exist until nightfall' (or something close to that).

Enjoyed reading this, well done!

The idea of this is spectacular.

Occasionally the sentences are a bit incoherent; otherwise lovely.

Please continue.