That's amazing!I love Ax,he's my favorite character!:)

Nice. I'm gonna put it on favorites.

Poor Ax. You write very well.

Very good. Quite introspective. This one gets four morphs out of five. (It's my ANIMORPHS rating system.)

Nice but why is the poem in the middle of the page?

This is more of a train of thought. I think there's something wrong in the middle IMHO the middle needs a (slight) rework.

:: Applauds ::

I like it. You captured Ax's dilema, I think.

{Hey, I liked that one. Excellent portrayal of Aximili's thoughts

Deep. Very deep.