more you must make more

Very cool. I liked it a lot. Please update soon!

You don't ever plan on updating, do you?

JUST UPDATE ALREADY!

I love this fic so much...

Why do you torture me so?

WHY?

I don't know how long I can wait. Plz!

JUST UPDATE ALREADY! PLZ!

Mal: Write more. Now.

Yami Mal: *starts to mock Mal*

Mal: Or I'll sic Chain on you. *lifts Chain over her head as if to throw her*

Chain: Put me down.

Mal: No.

Good story! Please continue!

So, do you plan on updating any time soon? I gotta read, ain't notin like this fic, I gotta read, ain't notin you can't write, I gotta read, come on! I gotta read, read, read, read, read, come on! Next chapter!

Make Mag and Chain fight more! It's funny!

This is really good! Continue asap

finally I thought this chapter would never get here! Please continue!

Your story was great! Please keep on writing some more. Its very interesting. If you want to visit my Evolution shrine then go here: prettylinear its not perfect yet but i really need some help. Thank you! Great story!

Its cool! I love your story! You have to continue. Evolution is one of the BEST games!

I like how this Story is turning out, I also like the Mag/Chain moments hurry with the next chapter pllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzz

hmm...

I remember you saying in the alst chapter taht this would be chapter-long event, but i have made typos too.

thank you for replying to my review.

, i admit that I might have scared readers off with chain's death :( I tried to make it serious.

2.I see bloody fics on all the time rated PG, so i didn't think it would matter much if it was PG-13

3. I didn't hear (or read) any complaints on maglauncher2023's fic 'The Night AFter' where they also have some 'fun'.

4. No I was not drunk , just adding some humour. I admit I went a little overboard in the violence factor, and I should have toned down teh blood and guts. Too serious is a bad thing.

5. I support both couples, Mag/Chain, and Linear/Mag. I just felt like writing Linear/Mag, cause I get these urges and... never mind.

thanks for the reply. I'll have these things corrected in later stories. I hope that you start putting a lot mroe detail in ur fics :

Haven't you guys heard? Evolution is making it's 3rd come back! This time on the GameCube! Check here for more details! : .

Hey, make things interesting! Bring Yurka in last-minute! (i will be a REALLY HAPPY KITTY! mia!) I mean, really, a fanfic is a fanfic, right? ...something could've happened, like when Yurka reached, i dunno, Purgatory or the Evolution equivalent of, he was told that the moment of his death was not then or something...WAIT! i just gave part of the plot for my fic away...drat...Oh well...Keep writing! this is funny...oh, thank you for making it Mag/Chain...now this means you HAVE to bring Yurka back...well, not really, but it would be preferred... Gosh, i'm bossy...sorry..._; I LIKE THIS FIC ANYWAY! _ TEE! ...sugar highs and not being able to beat bosses in E2 are the cause of my madness...beware...

You need to add a hellvua lot more detail