aww this was cute.

aweee that was adorable :3

The cuteness! It's overloading my FMA obsessed brain cells! XD

eh, you make me love ed/win even more! :) so yes, keep churning them out! :D this one was adorable. love the part where ed explains what it means to love someone. :)

hmm...this i supose could be called construtive critisisum.

i love the plot. um but i find five year olds don't generally talk like that to each other. at times it seemed almost like one of 'em was "the aldut" in the conversation. you know like an adult talking to a kid. they took turns. it's hard, alot of ppl fail at this, but you've got to try to put yourself into a five year olds head. i think you could greatly improve this by just tweeking the wording Ed and Winry use a bit.

i loved how you were able to convey Ed's innocent thinking. okay i can't think of anything else to write... hope you're not too offended! don't hate me! please. :( i mean well!

really sweet 3

The conversation between Ed and Winry was so cute. I can't help wondering if they would remember it when they're older, though.

I always love reading about these two as kids X3 It's so adorable! :D

This is so sweet. Great job!

so cute! hey, this sounds a bit like ch7 of my fic ultimate... weird

This is so cute

I love it! Keep posting more EdWin shots, please?

Panda.

Adorable!

SO Cute!

Hahaha that's adorable Although hard to image Ed saying those three letters sometimes. ;)

-Nyago