Would've been great if it went down like that in the actual show :

Nick

I think the con job just has to be the only plausible explanation for why the characters are acting so OOC on the show, so, obviously, I love this piece!

I especially liked the end, and how Chuck wondered about Hannah's motivations and dealing with his own hurting "...you're good at this." "You too." -

Wow! Fantastic ending.

Thanks for this!

really cool idea for a fic and very smartly written. well done!

I really wish that could be what's really happening on the show.

dont know if u will be doing other one shots but would love to see how you continue this story

Nicely done. I so hope something similar to this comes to light later on this season in a flashback.

And don't you just wish that actually happened in the series? Hated episode seven. :)

Fantastic.

This is every single thing I wish the writers would have done with the Hannah / Shaw storyline. Even the Jeff and Lester bit is a thousand times better than what really happened on the show.

It doesn't surprise me at all - you never fail to impress.

Nick

amazing...awesome. wow.

i am begging and dreaming that this or a variation could be real

It would be nice if they do it your way. Great story. Thanks for sharing.

This is an awesome transition between 3.06 and 3.07! If only the writers would include this kind of character interaction within the show.

I didn't like the way things turned out in the show either, and I like your version a lot better. Great job and awesome oneshot.

Ah now that's what I'm talking about! If only this is what we could've seen. Great job I liked it a lot.

How awesome would it be if this was really what was going on? Very awesome, that's how awesome, haha. Anyway, I really enjoyed this, UG, as I generally enjoy all of your stuff, and thank you so much for sharing!

I liked it.