Salwe, very funny story by the way. I liked the part about Sauron not being able to write because he was a giant Eyeball! Hahahahaha! I couldn't stop laughing. Also, I don't think you use to many demonstrative pronouns because it is supposed to be non-formal and conversational. Keep writing I REALLY want to know what Sauruman names his club. And Dumbledore break-dancing? Wierdly amusing! Vale!

ROFL! This is HILARIOUS! I LOVE it! Keep it up!

Order of the Cockatoo?
Sounds a bit perverse...*g*

Voldie working at Burger King! *rotfl*
Cool!
Nari
PS:What the f* means BFF? O_o

Poor snake!
*lol*
I always knew, those two would get on well ;-)
DON'T YOU STOP WRITING!
Greetz Nariel

HAHAHAHA...
Man, I just couldn't stop laughing
*choke*
OK, I'm all right. Write on!

lol loverly mucherly ton o' fun couldn't stop laghing the hole peirod

That was good, it was quite amusing and enjoyed it. Write some more, please.

Ooh! mORe soon PleasE!

LOL! that's so funny. :)Don't worry about demonstrative pronouns. You english teacher may care, but the rest of us don't. :) Keep going, It's funny.

This is incredible! It's really funny. I love it and I hope you write more soon!

Please write more! I must have more!Â

I like ur stories. Voldie and Sharkey are cool. My best friend and i have always imagined them being friends. Ur another person with the same idea as us. I really like it. Please get another chapter out soon! Woodelf193

this is soooo funny. I love the 'Order of the Cockatoo'! classic stuff.

This is a really good fic! please finish it!