| Reviews for Guitar girl : Da ja vu |
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xXNeverEndingFireXx 11/30/11 . chapter 4Oh em gee!Can you please update this is great stuff 3 guitar girl molly&dean 4ever! |
vividreamz 6/21/10 . chapter 4ummm... sorry, but who is dylan, do u mean dean. im sorry i just didn't get it. sorry |
vampgirl234 5/4/10 . chapter 1 Hi guys thanx for the reviews im working up the next chapter its just im busy with school and homework should be out soon maybe this week keep reviewing and know i do have ur comments in mind but it does get annoying when like 10 ppl tel;l me the same thing over and over again. im trying to create something new by putting slang into books the speech will contain slang but if u dont like how i write just say my ears are open and hopefully i wont get mad as i have a short temper! luving u all :P |
RainboLuck 5/2/10 . chapter 2This could potentially be a really good story, but you have to work on some things. 1) Grammer and punctuation. It seems like you're writing a conversation on MSN instead of a story. 2) Spelling. It helps if you write on Word or something that has spellcheck. You'd be surprised how much better your stories will be with just some cleaning up. |
Ayane Rose 4/16/10 . chapter 4this is so good, i always wanted to know what might happen if molly met dean again. it would be great if you would continue with this story. :) |
studentofhufflepuff 3/30/10 . chapter 1i like it:) dean was so mean in how he treated her in the book lol so cruel but i like this:) |
isabelisdoingwell 3/25/10 . chapter 4i vote you update soon :) though try to watch your grammar/spelling? the story's fab though- pls update soon! |
crazypanda815 3/22/10 . chapter 4 BTW:HIS NAME IS DEAN NOT DYLAN!BUT I LIKE UR MORE ATTENTION ON UR GRAMMAR AND NAMES! |
Vampgirl234 3/17/10 . chapter 4soz bout that told u i forgott got mixed up with diary of a crush |
iclemyerlover 3/15/10 . chapter 4Haha Oh Lordy! Nice chappie darling! 3 Roxy BTWhis name is Dean not Dylan |
lIttlE.mi55.psYco 3/15/10 . chapter 4Poor Molly |
Vampgirl234 3/14/10 . chapter 1sorry i havent updated but ive been reading lets ge lost its like the second book it features molly and jane you should all read it it's realy good atleast by tomorrow ill have another chapter as ur all asking and i hope you keep reading |
lIttlE.mi55.psYco 3/13/10 . chapter 3Update, please? |
iclemyerlover 3/7/10 . chapter 3OMG PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE UPDATE! |
LoveMeLots 3/5/10 . chapter 3yeah the story's !but when will you come up with the next chapter?:)love it!good work! |