   DiorNicole 2/14/10 . chapter 1You should be proud; this was a wonderful one-shot! Can never have enough Bamon fanfic!
1.) Such a realistic interaction between Bonnie & Damon.
“Go away, Damon.” It came out as a whisper, but she knew he’d heard it.
“I know I’ve been a jerk to you…to everyone. I know—.” Bonnie turned to face him, a veil of tears still visible on her face.
“You did this,” she whispered again. “You just couldn’t handle the fact that Katherine was gone, that you knocked down and killed everything in your path to get to a dead end. You killed her,” she pointed to her grandmother’s grave, “and I have to suffer for it.”
Damon’s stone face didn’t show any emotion, as if Bonnie expected him to feel anything. And just like that, Damon turned around and started to walk away. A surge of anger coursed through Bonnie at seeing him leave without the slightest apology.
She raised her hand and Damon stopped abruptly. A flick of her wrist brought him around to face her.
“Let me go now, witch, and I’ll forget this happened,” he said confidently even though Bonnie caught a flicker of uncertainty in his eyes.
2.) I’m glad you have Damon owing up to all his crap.
3.) I don’t think they realized how much the needed each other until this moment.
“Thank you,” she said and even though she hated crying in front of others, she cried in front of him.
Then she felt the strangest feeling. Damon was holding her. She should have pulled away, but she needed someone to lean on, even if it was the man she vowed to hate.
Damon didn’t know what compelled him to reach out to her since it was against his nature to show compassion. But he held onto her anyway. He needed this as much as she did. 145 years of searching a way to get to Katherine and it all blew up in his face. He didn’t understand what any of it meant, so he felt lost. Pretty much the same way Bonnie was lost without her magical confidant.
So he hugged her and caressed her hair, while she buried her face in his neck. He closed his eyes and for the first time, in a very long time, he felt at peace.
Bonnie lost track of how long they stood there, but it was long enough for her crying to subside and savor the embrace she longed for.
4.) What an ass!
Bonnie fell forward slightly, a rush of wind hitting her face. Just like that, Damon was gone leaving her in the dark.
5.) That’s right Bonnie; go let Damon have it.
Bonnie knocked on the door the day next day. Who the hell did he think he was? Kissing her and running off without an explanation. Bonnie was tired of being the shy one and this was the last straw.
6.) I’m glad Stefan look at all the facts and gave his brother good information.
7.) I loved the ending!
Great Work! Happy Writing!
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