Nice... an amusing ranma fic with nabiki shown as something other than a greedy scarlet woman. At least akane actually seems to follow the friendship statement of the original in this as well.

You have some skill at writing but you need to watch for POV mistakes.

A really nice story here. But, a Kuno with honor? I think your taking things a bit too OOC.

BUT, I'm still looking forward for more of this tale. Please, if you are still around, update !

-chronodekar

This is very good as well. I hope you'll keep writing this.

This is another story you should definitely consider picking back up at some point. I'm rarely ever treated to seeing Nabiki being given a reason to truly feel good about herself, and your Ranma, in this case, is certainly reason enough; he's a gem and your Nabiki needs a good guy at her side.

I'll subscribe to the story just in case you decide to resume writing it again in the future.

Nice to see a Nabiki and Ranma story, I don't see Nabiki is as that bad a person. Many stories seem to push her to the extreme, so it was nice to see one going the other way. Too bad to see that it has not continued.

A good read. As it is, though, I'd have to say Ranma is too Gary-Stuish. Perhaps if you add a bit of fashion sense, metrosexual behavior at random, a bit of vanity about his looks and stuff it would be more believable.

I really like it. I hope there is something more of this hiding in the works?

I see Ranma's getting a slight infusion of personality from yourself, but then again all characters do when you write...'cause it's always you telling the story. Even in my stories they get a slight infusion of my darker side, it's very noticable in my Kim Possible fics...but it's always there, no matter who writes it...no matter how hard they try to avoid it. But still good story, if only Ranma could have put Kuno down that fast in the Cannon.

Loved it !

You know, it's these type of fanfics I like where you write it out nice and well. It makes sense too. I'm a big Akane X Ranma fan but I also go for Nabiki X Ranma and Kasumi X Ranma fanfics as well. But I hate it when an author writes one of the pairs and makes Akane seem like a raging bitch. I won't mind if Ranma ends up with one or the other, but keep coninuing! :)

Well, you haven't updated anything in a year and a half, but that doesn't mean you aren't still out there. So, here's a review pour vous.

The line of Nabiki taking the engagement is long used, but a good one as she is not a greatly developed character in the anime and manga. The attitude at the beginning is especially bizarre and I think you did a good job manipulating it to your devices.

Also, adding a psychological effect to the curses is ammusing. The panda becoming more stupid (for lack of a simpler term) after the curse and Ranma being more emotional (the fainting you pointed out and the bursts of anger at the beginning).

Keep up the good work.

From the offices of AMWOOD co

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