| Reviews for Obese Children Wielding Arrows |
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ThunderNinjaBird 3/26/13 . chapter 1Funniest thing I've read in a while-I read parts out loud to my family and they loved it, too. The ending was fabulously romantic! |
SaraBahama 2/19/12 . chapter 1I loved it, Aka...especially the ending. Love your humor. |
iyimgrace 11/25/10 . chapter 1I just want to say that this story is so amazing! I laughed out loud, more than once! I can see the entire conversation unfold with the expressions and mannerisms of each one of them. So, so fabulous. Thank you! |
LaraSGCLena 2/21/10 . chapter 1“Friends who crave sexual relations with each other. Much like O’Neill and Major Carter.” ROFL, I just spilled my orange juice! (Jack), really lovely scene of them in the locker room...yes one day she'll be happy celebrating that certain day with a certain O'Neill :D Oh, and amazing job on all the research! |
sg-1fanintn 2/18/10 . chapter 1Funny and endearing! Thanks for writing! |
StarnightSam 2/14/10 . chapter 1As usual, great little story! I really enjoy your writing! |
laserswords55 2/14/10 . chapter 1 omg that was great ... very good :) ...*squeals* |
Leucothea29 2/14/10 . chapter 1 Oh, and thanks for writing/posting (and allowing anon. reviews so I can do this). |
Leucothea29 2/14/10 . chapter 1“That’s what she wants, sir.” Carter asserted. “You can’t choose who you fall in love with.” “No.” Said O’Neill. “No you can’t.” :D *Is mentally skipping through fields of flowers at the thought* I warn that the blatant fluffy shippiness is overt and cannot be controlled Nor should it be. This was a very nice piece of fluff with a smidgen of angst (Very small though) “Have some Jell-O.” I'm fairly sure that, due to all of these fanfics, I'll never look at jello (especially blue jello) the same way again. I just hope I'm near someone who gets any veiled/obvious references. :P :) |
polomare 2/13/10 . chapter 1You captured their voices perfectly! Not easy with four such different personalities. Good Job, I loved it. |
pain in the mikta 2/13/10 . chapter 1Sweet but a bit sad... Very cute, though, all in all! ;-) |
D.K. Rhoswen 2/13/10 . chapter 1This was so hysterical and then so sweet! truly loved it! 3 Dk Rhoswen/Keaira Taegan |
MuseUrania 2/13/10 . chapter 1This really hit the spot. :) Just what I needed today too. |
not a zatarc 2/13/10 . chapter 1This made me LOL and then AW. :) I really liked it. Nearly spit my coffee all over the computer screen, too. XD Very well executed. :D hehe. ;) |
froggy0319 2/13/10 . chapter 1Aw! He left her blue jello, how sweet :) |