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masaki yang yi1
2009-04-15 . chapter 2
damm,that is really sad and maybe it could get better in the next chapter?
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2008-06-09 . chapter 1
UPDATE
Daniel Thomas Stack
2008-03-14 . chapter 2
You know even if you never look at this review I have to say you are an EVIL SOB for posting two chapters and still not clearly saying what Akane said hurting Ranma. Even with the potion for it to be more than all the rest of the things listed it had to be a doozy.

Hopefully some day you will continue this story. Please when you consider it even if there isn't another chapter post an update saying what it was.
Dumbledork
2008-03-12 . chapter 2
Another great fic I'd like to see more of.
DrewB1442
2006-07-17 . chapter 1
This is a very well written piece of fanfiction. I think you have captured the characters very well and you could do well with finishing this story.
Howard Russell
2005-12-01 . chapter 2
I really want to see where Ranma goes from here.

Sorry, but I have to agree with the reviewer that said that, whatever it is that Akane was supposed to have said, it'll be anti-climactic at this point to reveal it. You're commited to keeping it a secret entirely or rewriting an earlier chapter to reveal it sooner.

Unless you mean for it to be a punchline. Upon reflection, I'm reminded of a story my sixth grade teacher told us. He took weeks telling us the tale of a young man seeking a bit of knowledge. Finally, after weeks of telling about the many adventures of the knowledge seeker, he approached the end of the tale. As the young man was only a few yards from the house of the one person in the entire world that could answer his question, he was run down by a truck. Moral of the story: always look both ways before crossing a street. After weeks of telling the tale where the question was asked repeatedly, the answer was never told. Bastard! Are you planning on something similar? I hope not, but it could be funny.
petalsofpain
2005-07-23 . chapter 2
500 fics... I'm even worse in 14 months I've read over 1600 fics... Rank this one in the top 100 though :)

Write more the potential for top 20 is there...
Firehedgehog
2004-09-12 . chapter 2
good fic, continue
Kinai
2003-05-30 . chapter 2
Good story. But are you going to update it??

Kinai.
Materia-Blade
2003-05-18 . chapter 2
I hope you continue this fic. Its' good I like it. Alot. It ranks in the top 20 of the 500 fics Ive read. (I'm not kidding I seriously have read 500 fics) Does that show devotion or obsession? Anyway, that definantly means your fic is good.
Praeceps
2003-05-04 . chapter 1
Hi.
Based on the date it was written, you haven't done much more in a while. Which is a shame as it seems most people are dying to know what *THAT* was. I think it's only fair to tell them, if nothing else
Eniku
2003-03-22 . chapter 2
Oh, I do hope you'll continue. I read your reviews and saw all the criticism certain people left, and I really hope that isn't why you've stopped. If so, don't listen. This is a wonderful story! Some people are just a little to stuck on minor details. So keep up the good work!
libhranan
2002-08-27 . chapter 2
ooooooooooooooo......
good fic! keep going!
Sporanox
2002-05-31 . chapter 1
Actually, there would be no way for even Nabiki to tell if Akane had been set up. She doesn't have any experience in herbs and it looks like she's shifting the blame from her (admittedly spoiled) little sister to someone else without any grounds of evidence. Nabiki is smart, but not THAT smart. I other words, that was lame. And I'm sure that Saggit and I are dying to hear exactly WHAT that 'lil bet of an insult that Akane said to Ranma was. It's not good to run a common literary trick into the ground like that.
-Sporanox
Miaka Kiri
2002-02-01 . chapter 2
Oh my gosh, this is GREAT!!! I can hardly WAIT to find out what happens next!! Do they manage to find Ranma? Where DID Ryoga get to? What's Ranma gonna do to try and get over the heartbreak?? This is a GREAT angsty story!!!
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