M, may be a bit too angsty for my tastes, but well written as always.

I just have one question and that is ,is Ranma dead or crippled?

Another excellent fic. So far I haven't been disappointed by any of your fics and request a lot more. And I hope that one day you'll be inclided to give us more of your excellent writings.

Oh my! Please finish this story and tell us what is happening with Ranma! Please?

Wow, this is a very dark story. What's going to happen to Ranma?

GREAT CHAPTER! I am wondering what type of damage the change did.

GREAT START!!

You going to finish this? I would like to see where this goes.

Hey keep up the good work you write great fics i want to see this one continued

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Good story.

One thing when you said: Depending on the timelines involved, the fight stays on the grounds of Furinkan High School (as opposed to ending up in a zoo). You are talking about Manga and Anime version Right?

Kinai.

Well, um, Sorry but I like your comedies a lot more... Angst stories just aren't your thing. The love happened a little too fast. And Ryoga didn't even know Ranma had been the one who had cursed him in this fight. Other than that continue it. It's got more potential then most.

One more thing KEEP THE OMAKI THEATER PRESENTS! THEY ARE HILARIOUS! Bye bye...

Good story. I don't think I've ever seen a divergence at this point. However, if you're following the original series' timeline, it's *really* early for Akane and Ranma to be throwing the word love around -- and I think they would realize it. (i.e., even if they start tossing the words around in the heat of the moment, the doubts are going to start kicking in: is it love, or just a reaction to the situation).

Does Ranma's arm have to be permantly disabled, can't he just a very long recover instead?

Nice idea--there are a few things wrong with this story though.

1. you need to leave more spaces between paragraphs.
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2. Make the font larger and easier to read.

Other than that it's pretty good. However, if ranma is unable to change back into a boy--you could have akane get cursed to turn into one so that they can have children.

Or,

If Ranma is able to change back when he heals enough. I take it that the arm is permantly disabled. Have him try to overcome his disablity in the long run. Please continue to write this story.