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| empresscherryblossom 2005-09-24 ch 1, anon. | abusegreat summary it is sad that chi-chi died and goku didn't know & i hate zairin! |
| CrAzY-Fan-Fic-Addict 2004-10-09 ch 1,  | abuseThat is such a sad story. I actually cried,you know that's saying something cause i'm usually the one laghing at the people that cry, but god!! That WAS a sad story. I hate goku, everyone should have never forgave him. Poor chichi. Goku er(knocks him on the head). |
| ChibiOtaku101 2003-12-06 ch 1, | abuseI loved this story except that Goku was a big ** in the begginning. That made me so mad. And poor chi chi. I'm glad it turned out ok though. I hope that you keep going on your story ^_^ (Now I have another thing for my Fav stories list ^_^) |
| >_ 2003-09-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseGOKU HOW COULD YOU?! TRAITEROUS ** WHO DESERVES TO DIE! after all chichi has done for him he's off with some ** while she's in her death bed?! i dont see how gohan and goten could';ve given him so easily, any other kid would've tossed him out of their lives! por chichi...dammit how unfortunate for chichi! who the hell IS that zairan or whatever her name is?! the B*!! I CANT BELIEVE GOKU WOULD DO SOMETHING LIKE THAT! HE NEEDS TO BE PUNISHED! btw...GREAT FIC! written extreamly well~ |
| animegirl171 2003-08-18 ch 1, | abuseomg this is so sad it almost bring me to sadnes and i can't belive goku did that oh that got me ** great job and i g2g read something fun to get rid of the sadness |
| lunagirl300 2003-08-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was so sad! I don't believe Goku would do such a thing! Make a sequel!It would be great if you did! |
| moon girl16 2003-07-12 ch 1, | abusewrite a sequal! i'm crying and ** off at the same time! ARGH! good story moon girl |
| pRiSka 2003-04-21 ch 1, | abuseCRIES... well CRIES AND CRIES, i diddnt think a fanfic can make cry all this, wow, maybe i vas emotional today XDD really, i cried a lot.. GOOD! WE NEED A SEQUEL! *dry her tears* |
| Amai Kitsune 2003-01-21 ch 1, | abuseThis is a super story, and very sweet. There were a few spelling mistakes, but nobody's perfect. I had never thought of Goku as the kind to have an affair, but hey, in fanfics anything can happen. Great job, hope to see a sequel! |
| Crazed T.V. Girl 18 2003-01-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseAAAAHHH!!! YOU HAVE TO DO A SEQUAL!!!!!! This story just broke my heart and was the best story I have ever read with this kind of plot!!!! Your an amazing writer!!! Please!!! Please do a sequal!!!!!!! :-( |
| rae 2003-01-12 ch 1, anon. | abusekind sad, but i guess i could stand a sequel its just so hard 2 see goku betray chi-chi like that. |
| coco-bee 2002-11-16 ch 1, | abuseit's a very good story when i read it i almost cried |
| jesse 2002-10-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt was really a good story, brought me to tears, I hope you will write a sequal, i kind of think you were mad at goku, when you wrote this or you really don't like chichi, but in the sequal I would make it about chichi and goku falling in love all over again, but hey thats just me, but it really caught my attention, you wrote a good story and I hope the sequal will be the same. |
| Supreme Noodle of the East 2002-05-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh My God !!!! This was so sad. I actually cried when Chi-Chi died. Poor Chi-Chi. pleaaaaaaaaaaaase wright a sequel!!!! |
| Chibi_Chichan 2002-05-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really don't like Ziarin only when she wants them to be just friends. Chichi should be wished back but she can't cause she died normally not died from someone killing her but they should send her as a angel! Every night! Please write a sequel to this story ok? Lovely story and please continue! |