|Reviews for An Unlikely Unity!|
| Spikesagitta 2/20/10 . chapter 1
but they're still cute together :) the orbs/spirits part was a good add in, and Makoto's mother at the end there observing her sure was a fluffy scene to me
| Revolutionary Venom 2/13/10 . chapter 1
This is a really good story! I never would have thought about what Mako-chan and Hotaru have in common, but now that I've read this, I can definitely see it. Makes me ponder if I like the Ami/Mako from the manga or this pairing better...
| James Birdsong 2/13/10 . chapter 1
Nicely done. Cute even maybe