but they're still cute together :) the orbs/spirits part was a good add in, and Makoto's mother at the end there observing her sure was a fluffy scene to me

This is a really good story! I never would have thought about what Mako-chan and Hotaru have in common, but now that I've read this, I can definitely see it. Makes me ponder if I like the Ami/Mako from the manga or this pairing better...

Revolutionary Venom

Nicely done. Cute even maybe