Wow that was great! I have to say chapter 3 was my favorite, even though Jak died. You should REALLY write a sequel to A Matter of Time!

The chapter three was so sad!

And Damas does not believe that Jack is his son, but I wonder what would happen if it confirms that the boy is his son who died

Sorry, I have hope that my English is understood something!

i think that the saddest thing is that he will die continuously for always and eternity thanks to that time loop

Love the out-takes from A Matter of Time, but are you gonna have a sequel to the original story?

Ya really need that sequel...

that last part made me cry :( i liked it a lot though and its cool to see what else could have happened. thank goodness it didnt! lol keep writing ]

Oh man... I teared up reading this.

This my favorite chapter by far. Emotion and detail mixed just right.

Aww... Poor Damas...

Keep writing

wow, i really liked this chapter, cant wait to read more

I'd like to see your take on Jaks meeting with Keira. As in the game their reunion's was clouded a tad unwelcoming because of Jaks association with Krew.

I always wondered what would have happened if Jak, Keira, older Samos, and Daxter went through the Rift Gate with younger Samos and younger Jak.

faving it.

you know, this would be a great story to write, the "older brother" of the great mar who helped create haven city. the troubles and early wars between the metal heads and the early settlers of Haven city, all a while jak and the great sages help with the eco that haven city needs earlier in its time.

...Id read that lol

and yeah i liked the chapter

Still a good read. I don't remember everything from your story so the little snippet at the beginning really helped.

I love little Mar. Always have and always will :D

I noticed you misspelled 'great' when Samos woke up BTW.

Ah... I already like this little new thing you have going here.

I'll be keeping an eye on this!

so sig finds out earlier that jaks damas son, makes sense

hope it isnt a one shot