I dislike Mark but I love this! This fic makes him seem a lot more likeable and insecure that he seems in the series, if the writers of GF had written him like you have, he might not be so hated. It's great that you wanted to try something different with him anyway, I don't think anyone is going to hate you.

Damn you ! I cant belive you made me feel for Mark of all people ! its really well written and shows good insite into Marks done .

this is a good story, well done.

This is so good! It's such an accurate view of how Mark felt like when he joined the Snow Kids, he must have felt like an outsider.