Hi!

I like, that you had the guts to continue the original books, your story falls right in, as if it was written by Wooding. You also brought a few intriguing new characters, I especially like Fawks.

I suppose, in the end Ryushi will get together with Aurin? It's kind f logical:)

I hope you didn't abandon the story, it would really be a shame. I'd like to see more of the plot,

Mikonenya

Bloody hell. This is probably the best fan fiction I've read of anything, let alone Broken Sky. You're really doing the title justice and even seem to mimic Wooding's style of writing.

My only criticism would be that the pace of the story is extremely slow. There seems to be an awful lot of reflection of the characters rather than story progression. However, I wouldn't worry too much about that right now. I really enjoyed this and I'm looking forward to further chapters )