Then he kissed her

You spelled arcanine wrong its not articanine but overall the story is really good and I can't wait for the next update.

keep going

i really like the story! Do another chapter soon, soon, soon!

You shouldn't name your story "pokemon fan story". Every single story here is a "Pokemon fan story".

Also, your sentences seem to be missing the capital at the beginning of each paragraph and the period at the end of each paragraph. Mind explaining that...?

(And the story doesn't seem to have much of a plot, really...sorry if I come off as blunt.)