Sounds like two people that needs to be locked in a closet. Or accidently shoved into each other so that they involuntarily kiss. Or better yet, have someone actually be able to hurt Xellos and her defend him! (sans the gawking group at the time). Ah, yes... Anyway, very nice! A Thought-Provoker. ^_^

I think the feelings were very well done. But since I'm a die hard Xellos/Lina fan I can't help but wish there was a 3rd chapter... where secrets were traded.

aw...this is bittersweetly cute! ... my first Slayers fic! ^_^ only watched a few eps ... maybe I'll decide the download it next month or something, I'm over my bandwith limit this month as it is and I'm still planning on getting the rest of InuYasha >.

OOH! MAKE A HAPPY ENDING!! THIS IS SOOOOOO KAWAII!!! I LOVE IT!
~Shi-chan

MORE! ONEGAI!

How sad for the both of them! What a shame for things that have could been. But that was a nice story of Xel/Lina--I'm always a fan! Keep up the work!

Oi poor lina, poor xelloss.......TOOOOO SAD! Love Xelina fics tho.

:*( ahhh How sad... Poor Lina and Xellos. I feel for them, LOL. PLease email me when you update your story. Thanks! Keep up the great work!

Short, sweet and has a good flow...I like it I just wish to see more of it.

it's interesting how you made their thoughts mirror each others

kawaii!! please write more soon! ur such a good writer!!!

write more!!!! this is good so far, so pleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaasseeee write more!!!! i like x/l fics. ^_^

aww.. Xellie..
Aww... Lina...
Is there more?

awww, that was sad... but very well done anyway. Great job, keep up the good work -Kiwi

*stares in awe*
An awesome plot idea and perfect atmosphere make for a great fanfic don't they ^^?