Oh what a sneaky chap using the bard to woo Hoshi! This was very good and nicely written. Thank you for a good story, Ali D :)

This was really sweet, and a wonderful use of Shakespeare. I actually have seen the Branagh

version, and that helped me envision your story. Very nice :) I especially loved Archer's line

about how elaborate the seduction of Hoshi was, involving the whole ship.

Ohh! I love it! Hehehehe! It was so sweet! :-))!

Nice story! He's a sneaky devil. But it worked! They llines from the play were a little confusing, but I just read them over again. Good job.