Wow, what an awesome story. I loved Endymion/Mamoru in this; so much darkness but still light somehow. I also think this would make a great movie. Beautiful.

I remember reading this years ago, and it doesn't matter how many times I read it, it still moves me the same way it did the first time. It's wonderful to know that for 20,0 of bad written fanfics there is always this gem to turn to.
Love,
T.I

wow, deep.

I have been reading sailor moon fanfiction for about eight years now. Out of thousands of fics, this is still my favorite.

I am just going through your stories, they're rather addictive. I do hope you finish the third Law Keeper story though. It seems as if you haven't updated since Jan 2005!

maa, maa- such an incredibly well-done, imaginative story! This was a joy to stumble across.

I have never read the manga, and don't know if Cosmos is an actual character. I have never liked how Cosmos was portrait in other fanfictions and in turn dislike all the other cosmos fics out there, but I am intrigued by this. Who knew that a very good intention decision could result in so much evil. Maybe I should read more fics, this was very interesting.

Usually, I love queen serenity but I don't like her much in this fic. It was all her fault.

I was very sad that you killed the shitennou. How could you? I love them and the senshi. Was so very dispointed that you didn't even make them attracted to each other if not hooking them up, since they're enimies and all. I think there were hints of something between them from time to time, but then nothing really happened in the present (of this fic that is). Why should only Endymion and Serenity has happiness?

The whole thing with the baby is confusing to me. The acts and witnesses...what's all that about? First I thought that Endymion was acting evil to tricked everyone, but it turn out that the senshi is in on it too. Was Queen Serenity the only one that is in the dark about that whole "ceremonity" thing.

Honestly, I thought that the fic would end when Endymion freed Serenity, with everyone begin a new life, life-time, starting over. Because I think, by the end of this fic, every character mind is very messed up from reliving so many life time, they should have a chance to start fresh with the knowledge that they weren't responsible for destruction in their previous life.

Thank you for a great Sailor Moon fanfiction. I really enjoyed reading it.

I enjoyed this fic immensely and I consider one of the most beautifully written and interesting fanfictions that I have ever read. It revolves around the question 'what if,' and it proves a point that choices do make a differences in how certain events work. It's refreshing to see that such a very complex concept is put into explaining that if the actions the Queen of the Moon took were different from what had occured in the original plotline of Sailormoon, then the possibilities on what does occur chronologically are immensely plenty. I liked how it played out though. This fic is very creative. I enjoyed how Endymion, and Serenity/Cosmos were characterized. It showed a much more deeper meaning to the term 'soul-mate,' when the fic revealed that Endymion, without Serenity, was a shadow of what kind of person he would have been. I also believe that Endymion would have been a much different person than he is in the original plotline if events in this fic had occured there. I also loved how Serenity/Cosmos was portrayed as innocent, pure, and understanding, able to see further into what Endymion was and able to grasp that he was a far more beautiful person than he appeared. Quite an interesting ending of the double destiny which lead way to the birth of Chibiusa. Will the generals be brought back to life through reincarnation or are their souls finally at peace? I have read this fic a total number of five times. Each time, I find that I gain a better understanding of it. I really enjoyed this fic as I may mentioned before. It is truly beautiful and meaningful. I look forward to any other work you have put forth out onto this site. Thank you for the effort you put into this one though. I have never read anything like it and it has really been a wonderful experience. I could go on forever about this fic but I find that only one word can express upon you on how I felt when I finished the last chapter:
Bravo.

Thank you again,
Jasngurl88

Wow I've read so many sailor moon fics but yours is absolutely amazing. It is brilliantly thought out. You took the essence of the sailor moon series and made it completely your own, adding so much depth and exploring new possibilities. I love it. Thank you for such an enjoyable story!

i liked it ... a nice change from the regular story line
good job

HOLY BEJESUS! THAT WAS A GOOD STORY!!

Awesome! Best Sailor Moon fic I have ever read. You have an amazing writing style. I loved it. Nice way to raise the bar for all fan fic writers, although I have yet to read one that even comes close to the quality of this story. Great job.

Unbelieveably awesome! This is one of the best stories I have EVER read. I really can't find accurate words for it...just...awesome.

wow. i can't word just how magnificent this is. you have a very prosperous writing career ahead of you.

oh wow great story...actually i think all your stories are very well written. keep up the good work.