   Jeremy Shane 5/9/10 . chapter 30good story |
| David Fishwick 5/8/10 . chapter 30 I liked how you wrote Cordelia and Gunn. Please write more thanka snd thanks for updating. |
| Jeremy Shane 5/8/10 . chapter 29 good chapter & more please |
| David Fishwick 5/8/10 . chapter 29 Please write more as I am enjoying the story. Thanks for updating. |
| anon 5/6/10 . chapter 28 Liked blood addict line |
| Jeremy Shane 5/6/10 . chapter 28 good chapter & more please |
| David Fishwick 5/6/10 . chapter 28 Thanks for writing a cool idea and please update soon thanks. |
| Jeremy Shane 5/4/10 . chapter 27 good chapter & more please |
| David Fishwick 5/3/10 . chapter 27 Thanks for a cool ending and I hope there will be a sequel soon. I enjoyed reading the story. |
| Jeremy Shane 5/2/10 . chapter 26 good chapter & more please |
| David Fishwick 5/1/10 . chapter 26 Please update soon as I am loving the story. Thanks for writing. |
| Jeremy Shane 4/29/10 . chapter 25 good chapter & more please |
| David Fishwick 4/29/10 . chapter 25 I liked how you wrote the battle scenes and please update soon thanks. |
| Jeremy Shane 4/27/10 . chapter 24 good chapter & more please |
| David Fishwick 4/27/10 . chapter 24 Cool chapter and please keep up the good work as I am enjoying the story. |
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